There’s a bunch of posts about the iptables-save function of the built-in iptables module not working in many cases, so I figured it was a safer bet to suggest the playbook include an actual command invocation.
In my personal experience, the module doesnt actually save the persistent rule in about half the cases. I haven’t looked into it much, but it seems happen more on systems where systemd iptables-firewall is present. (Not trying to start a flame war)
Turnkey images are usually built on popsicle sticks and chewing gum; they use old packages, their configs are often really janky and they do not like being updated.
I’m not kidding you, you’d be better off building nextcloud in a generic debian container.
As for the errors, as others have mentioned these are more or less easily fixed one at a time.